Monday, July 5, 2010

Die-hard Rati fan and talented girl from Kolkota who is not interested in MJHT season 2 anymore shares her own creation here.


Read her captivating description of a scene between Mayank and Nupur

Nupur stood standstill in the middle of her suite in d hotel.the plush decorated interiors done in pink and mauve wud have given her solace n peace of mind for which she had come to manali, far frm d maddening crowd n bustle of d city of mumbai.but d breathtakingly beautiful view made her evn more sad and depressed.she remembered d times Mayank had been wid her,was close 2 her n felt a deep sense of loss now. those moments were only a part of her now n her sole companions.Yes,now ,whn mayank is no more wid her.she remembered d last tym they had cme here.they were wid samrat,gunjan,diya,benji nd uday.she remembered d touch of his against her nd was roused!!till dis day his thoughts gave her a wonderful shiver,wht love it was!!!d beautiful realtionship they shared-d fights,d love,d care n concern she cud feel in his eyes surrounded her and haunted her.her past,done up so beautifully wid mayank made her evn more miss him.d bubbly n vivacious facade of d evr -smiling girl had disappeared when mayank left her.Sorry,she left him-she was d one who dddn't believe his explanations thinking them 2 b excuses.nd now,whn she knows wht d truth is-he is not wid her.

She knew now dat he was not 2 b blamed.actually he never was.he had been a perfectionist.whether it was in love,he alwayz gave her d perfect love she wanted,or whether it was for nething else,and of course,evn now-he gave her d exact amount of pain,perhaps it was more than exact.the love dat had been for him now rose up as a searing pain within herself.d pain of having lost him.but still she had a little ray of hope smewhere-if he came back!i wud make up to him for all d tym they have lost together. "I promise Mayank,i wud do whtever u say.just tell me once dat u love me,hold me once,let me tell d world dat if there was evr love,mine was forever meant 2 b urs". She realized it was futile.he was not wid her and wud probably b never with her. After dinner,d beautiful locales of manali drew her towards them.she kept walking along d steep hills when she saw a glowing light in d distant dark.it seemed 2 beckon her, calling her 2 lose herself within it,never having 2 bear d pain she felt now,d pain of living all alone her lyf widout Mayank.she moved foreward,trustingly at the glow,felt her pain lessening,nd d burden being lifted off her shoulders.she felt somebody calling her- N-U-P-U-R!!!!!!!!! and den,d sound died away nd she felt everything going dark she opened her eyes.was it true?was mayank really in front of her????!!it cudn't be!!!but no,he was there.nd den,d magical words-I LOVE U NUPUR!!!!,how she had wanted 2 hear them all this tym....!!!!He had come following her after diya told him everything and he realized how much even he loved her..

not a moment more to lose of their togetherness. he didn't care of wht had happened,who was to blame,all he knew dat she was with him now."I m sorry nupur i left u." "No mayank,it was me"i m d one 2 blame"But it didn't matter now,all dat mattered was dat they were 2geder,d wonderful feel of her body against him when she hugged him wid all d passion in d world.d hug sloved all d issues between them nd she knew he was wid her now nd forever!!!they stood there,lost in each other's embrace,they shared d same rhythm of love,d rhythm of the universe,something dat made them close for eternity!!!!THey held each other close and d warm glow of love shined upon them in d form of d first shining rays of d morning sun of manali....they didn't knew their embrace lasted d whole night!!!!!!

Deblina,city-kolkata...d city of joy,smething else also gave me utter joy n happiness-our Mayur n Nupur-nd we won't let dat happiness go away

2 comments:

  1. Beautifully written Deblina!

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  2. Lovely story..pls bring Rati di back...pls listen to our requests...Mayur r always meant to b together...pls reunite our Mayur

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